DokuChamp's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rick and Morty]

Yeh, I'm pretty sure family guy was already dead before the next episodes airing on 4th of October... Specifically Stewies character. Lol.
Anyway, Nice work. Ricks right foot needs to look at us a bit more. Also I think Morty should be FREAKING THE FUCK OUT!! a bit more. You know... Since he's Morty... Also the lighting has a few conflicting bits: the right of Ricks coat has no shadow but Mortys right does?
But yeh. I love the facial expressions though. Even Rick's like "Fuck this sh*burp*it! I'm out!" lol.

Shapow64 responds:

Thanks for the critique.

[Succubus Hotter than EVER!]

Just saying, you may want to reference the original art in your future work, other wise It looks like your taking other peoples content. Because I've seen this image before... Here is where I saw it last a year ago or so: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MtOAE8WTQu4
So yeh... It's good looking... Yes you did draw this one... However I've seen this image before... But since you haven't referenced the original artist or at the very least say that this isn't an original work. I'm gonna have to rate this lower. If this post was original (even if the art was shit) I'd still rate it higher than if it were good and someone else's work (that you haven't referenced). And no offence I think everyone else should take into consideration what I'm saying and rate accordingly, because It's not a good thing to take other peoples work...
You have some good work on this account. It'd be a shame if more than just one were "stolen" form someone else and that you're tricking us... Please go back to creating either original content or "inspired by" content rather than "stolen from" content. Thank you.

DrawingWithArthuz responds:

lmao, I never said I owned the original work.
this was my first digital work, back then i used to copy by eye every single drawing I liked.
and to be honest I looked for the name of the artist long enough before i gave up and decided to upload
this work with "ownership".
I've drawn long enough now and I don't longer copy or even take reference, but as you can see here:
http://drawingwitharthuz.deviantart.com/art/Your-teddy-bear-is-shy-497286660 When I know who the original artist is, I address it. I had at least the decency to not say I owned the original work, anyway this one still remains my version of it, meaning I'm not doing anything wrong...

[Robosect]

Nice work man. The sheen on the metal is really nice (it seems like you've also applied a bit of a mat ish surface to the left wing which looks nice. The colours complement each other well. And if I may add, has a very Dutvutian feel to it with the excess amount of spikes as well as the theme sci-fi. If you haven't seen Dutvutans work I would definitely check him out. But yeh, I do find the angle of it weird. The legs are positioned making it look like we should see the front more, but the head/front LED thing of the robot is only barely visible, making it look... No offence... Awkward... I feel like it's mostly the front right leg that kinda destroys the illusion however I think the only correction if you were to do any (not that you should buuut) would be moving that leg a bit closer to the frong left leg... If that makes sense... Also, I feel like you should experiment with poses, even though I know this is only concept art and you're only wanting to show of it's size and general look. I feel like a pose could be a very good way of expressing it's function in more depth and depending on whether it's got some sentient, self aware AI... It's personality...
Also It seems like there are conflicting lighting effects. The shine on the front left leg makes it seem like it's hitting the metal at an angle smaller than what the shadow makes it out to be. However, the light hitting the left wing makes the light look like it's right above it, although It's not very noticeable. However, I might just be me being wrong about how light works so please if you want tell me I'm a fucking idiot... I feel like that sentence is also structured wrongly... Hmm...
Anyway, I'd like to see some more of this stuff in the future (/^v^)/~!

Puddingfuzz responds:

Thanks for the advice, really appreciate it ^__^

[Motoko]

Don't worry. I'd be tired after drawing and proceeding to fap to this for 2 hours straight. I don't remember her having such a ghetto booty th0... Hmm... Shame there isn't enough to the picture I can make jokes about nor actually criticize. I could talk about how "YOU'RE AN AWSUME ARTST I LV U(♥‿♥)" but I'll leave the ass kissing to the comments that follow...

NateDeCock responds:

Haha, you flatter me good sir.

[Young Ursula]

Ursula!! Trying to cup a feel? I feel if she was in her older state I wouldn't be able to say the same thing and it still be funny... I would find it concerning... However right now I'm mostly concerned if she's old enough for me to say that and not have the police come to my house... Anyway nice work. I'm not a massive fan of the pose. Seems quite bland. However I love the lighting and shading, gives her skin a very rough look to it which is awesome. I also love her head. The shape is awesome and the eyes are places well enough that she doesn't look like a gray alien. Anyway back to the pose. I'm not sure of it (by the way I'm only gonna talk about the human aspects of her as I'm not too familiar with tentacles... Or at least not in this context) but I'm not a fan of it... I think you should use her pose to your advantage and give her a very dominant pose, chest out, and mix it with a sinister and evil pose, hand clenched in the light (I know you've kinda done that but it looks more like she's checking if it's raining rather than being all evil and shit). But yeh apart from the pose I like it, it utilities a very nice art style even if it's different from the work you usually post. But yeh... Nicely done, I would like to see more work in the style again.

Platanoz responds:

Thanks for the advice, i Will definitely use it for my next illustration. :)